The book feels like a guided tour with isolated stops and no feel as to how they all relate to each other. Go here, ask for help. Go there, ask for help. Every once in a while, it’s broken by something or other, none of which incidents particularly engaged me. None of the characters engaged me or seemed memorable. The ending seemed like trying to wave a magic wand and failing – not that it didn’t get the happy ending for the story – but that it didn’t make any kind of real scientific sense, which is important given the nature of the ending.
This story would have benefited from someone reading it and asking the author a few tough or searching questions before publication.
I’m going to give it a five of ten rating – the writing flowed, the author has ability, it just didn’t engage me. By Amazon standards, a three star review
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